Thursday, May 9, 2019

The Ocean

this week room 2 has being learning about  interesting language  this is my ocean poem and i have in my writing what i can hear, smell and fell.
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  1. AnonymousMay 9, 2019 at 12:31 PM

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  2. AnonymousMay 10, 2019 at 2:52 PM

    I like that you have used shapes.
    Next time you should use some smilies.
    I like that you have used explation marks.

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  3. AnonymousMay 13, 2019 at 9:53 AM

    I like how you entertained me in your writing

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  5. AnonymousMay 13, 2019 at 9:58 AM

    I liked how you used shapes for your background

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  6. AnonymousMay 13, 2019 at 10:02 AM

    maybe put some more descriptive language in your writing

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