Monday, July 29, 2019

KW Poetry

This week Room 2 and I have been working on using interesting language such as Verbs, Adverbs, Nouns and Adjectives. Here is a poem where i have used all of those interesting words.  

The never ending sky slowly covers the rocky mountains.


 The bright yellow sun surrounds the green fuzzy bushes.


The snowy sharp hills slowly get iced.


the pond slowly get shaded with dirty pond scum.


 The long sticks stand patiently.

3 comments:

  1. maybe you can work on your sentence to make scene

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  2. I like how you told me what your going to do and you did it

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  3. I like how you used capital letters in your sentence

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